Research and Planning 12/20 (C) Production 36/60 (C)
You have produced sound research and draft work for your production. To improve further summarise the key findings of your audience research (who are your target audience? What do they want to see in your magazine?) and explain how this will help you to make a sucessful product. Summarise the findings of your research into similar magazines - what are the conventions of music magazines? You need to complete a production plan. Try to embed your research and planning.
Your production makes effective use of colour and layout, and shows a good understanding of convention. To improve further try to find a more appealing font to use as your main font, and remember you need to have a variety of fonts in your magazine. Look again at the layout of your double page spread. I think it may look better if you had another column of text as there is a lot of empty space in the image. Look also at the placement of your headline and pull-quote. Consider using a standfirst beneath the headline. Try to add some text to fill the empty space at the end of the article.
You now need to complete your evaluation, and the improvements to your Research and Planning, and your magazine by the final deadline of the 7th of April.
Research and Planning 12/20 (C)
ReplyDeleteProduction 36/60 (C)
You have produced sound research and draft work for your production. To improve further summarise the key findings of your audience research (who are your target audience? What do they want to see in your magazine?) and explain how this will help you to make a sucessful product. Summarise the findings of your research into similar magazines - what are the conventions of music magazines? You need to complete a production plan. Try to embed your research and planning.
Your production makes effective use of colour and layout, and shows a good understanding of convention. To improve further try to find a more appealing font to use as your main font, and remember you need to have a variety of fonts in your magazine. Look again at the layout of your double page spread. I think it may look better if you had another column of text as there is a lot of empty space in the image. Look also at the placement of your headline and pull-quote. Consider using a standfirst beneath the headline. Try to add some text to fill the empty space at the end of the article.
Current Marks
ReplyDeleteResearch and Planning 12/20
Production 36/60
Total: 48/100 (E)
You now need to complete your evaluation, and the improvements to your Research and Planning, and your magazine by the final deadline of the 7th of April.